-I'm glad you like my revised dialogue suggestions and hope you incorporate them in your final edit.
-Sifo-Dyas/Qui-Gon: The logistics of this will have to be hammered out, but if you're open to the idea I hope we can find a way of getting it done. This will tie into the extended ending with Sidious and Dooku, as that's where an explanation will be needed.
-The Lama-Su dialogue is good. I don't know if you'd had a chance yet but I'd again suggest checking out "The Island" to see if there's anything you can use on the Obi-Wan end of the cloning discussion.
-My final opinion on Padme's bedroom scene: cut it entirely.
-I love what you'ce done with the chase.
-Shmi's funeral at sunset: brilliant! It would be great if you could accomplish this all the way through. I would suggest a wipe transition between Geonosis and Tatooine though. And obviously Cliegg's dialogue will need to be muted.