Here's the original for your reference: original
It comes with the usual disclaimer (the sound effects have not been finalized or put into stereo yet, and I haven't replace Anakin's voice for this clip).
Here's an example of how the zoom can be used on the video. The zoom is very effective. The actual content and sound is different from what I'll change it to, but I just wanted to give you an example:
Zoom
And here's my crazy idea (which may or may not work) to change the funeral or the Anakin/Padme receive message scene into a sunset scene: sky
As you can see, I actually decided to end the Obi-Wan scene with a shot of the Geonosian creeping out, as the music builds. You know Obi-Wan's in trouble by the time we cut away. I actually think this increases the tension in the tunnel later on, because you know that these bugs made short work of Obi-Wan previously. Otherwise, you don't know how Obi-Wan was captured. Then, you realize that they're worse than stormtroopers in the droid factory. They fly around with guns but they never even get an opportunity to use them.