I won't post this here. If anyone reeeally needs to read it - like, say, you're thinking of doing your own edit in a style similar to Jambe's or mine, and are curious what was said here, email me at tygerbug at yahoo dot com.
Jambe's disc is wonderfully done, and receives my high recommendation. I hope he takes my additional ideas and suggestions into account and makes it even better ... but either way it's a great disc.