g00b said:
Imhotep said:
Star Wars isn’t Star Wars without an opening crawl and fanfare. I enjoy what you’ve done here by taking inspiration from EddieDean’s Clone Wars Refocused, but with your own spin on that style.
I’ll have full opening crawls in my movie edit versions. Keep an eye out if you’re interested in them.
Ah sorry, I meant that the title cards you have are just as good as a classic Star Wars crawl!
The timing of the opening crawl is quite fast, and makes it hard to read the text in time. Consider the same timing as CW: Refocused?
I use the exact same timing as he does… 😉 I think I use a smaller font though. What did you think of season 1’s text? They’ve all got the current longer time version of the opening. (Some episodes don’t have this yet).
Overall the Season 1 text works well, and the transition between the title cards is a good length. I think my issue is that some of the lines fade in too quickly, before I can finish reading the previous line. In CW: Refocused the first part of the first title card is just one line. If you want each section to be two lines then maybe the timing shouldn’t be the same as CW:R?
g00b said:
@Imhotep I’ve just had a listen to Alliance, it is a great rousing fanfare. I think for Rebels though a rousing fanfare doesn’t necessarily hit the right vibe. The track is also a touch too short as well. It is a solid suggestion but I think for what I’m going for the theme I’ve got works better 😄
Fair enough! I hadn’t considered the length of the audio track. The Lothwolf theme you have works well regardless.