Alternatively, one could cut it so that Palpy is getting ready to strike, cut the awful flying spinning whateverthehellthatis effect and cut to Anakin landing, from there cut back to the battle and it’s just Mace vs. Palpy.
The FX are so bad it seems to me a fair trade, haven’t looped back to the music cues, might have an issue there.
I think it’s important to see the other Jedi die on screen, unless you remove them from the scene entirely, which I think is a little bit beyond what this edit is attempting to do.