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.Mac.
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STAR WARS: EP IV 2004 REVISITED ADYWAN *1080p HD VERSION NOW IN PRODUCTION
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24-May-2026, 9:49 AM

Final stab at this, guys, I promise šŸ˜„

Been thinking recently how all of that open sky to the one side in my previous concept was making the shot feel a bit imbalanced.

The original idea for having Yavin Prime behind the Great Temple was to help guide your eyes there, so I’m hoping that this next concept will still accomplish that by instead using the planet (plus the edges of the screen and the treeline) to help ā€œframeā€ the Temple, while also maintaining a more balanced composition. Hopefully I made that make some sense? 😃

I’m a complete novice at this kind of editing, btw, so it does look very rough, but wanted to try to putting more effort into the concept this time around and learn a thing or two. I know the clouds across Yavin Prime look terrible which is why I didn’t attempt to add more, lol, so hopefully I’ll have better luck at figuring that out another time. But anyway, this is just another possible idea for Ady if he likes.

And that is a great observation, ImperialFighter, in regards to the temple’s windows. I think that’s a good thing for Ady to consider, too, if he hasn’t already.