I didn’t go to film school, but I think wiping from a static shot to a shot with a zoom breaks some kind of editing rule.
Oh, no I wasn’t suggesting a zoom… The point I was making was just the focus of the shot 😃
JEDIT: Actually, zoom shots can happen after static shots. Still wasn’t suggesting a zoom, though.
JEDIT 2: Once again, apologies for the very rudimentary concept, but you guys can get what’s going on…
This is essentially all I was suggesting: just making the top of the Temple the focal point for viewers. I feel that having Yavin behind it in the sky can also help draw your eye there as well — and for some extra visual appeal, since there is more sky 😃