Originally posted by: aPPmaSTer
I was also thinking of another picky idea to put on my site, and I wanna get some feedback on it first. In ANH Han Solo says, "I expect to be well paid. I'm in it for the money." What if...we reversed those two lines? I think it would make a lot more sense and go much better with the conversation. Check it out:
HAN: I'm not in this for your revolution and I'm not it for you, princess. I'm in it for the money and I expect to be well paid.
LEIA: If money is all that you love, then that's what you'll receive.
I think it works pretty well...any thoughts?
I was also thinking of another picky idea to put on my site, and I wanna get some feedback on it first. In ANH Han Solo says, "I expect to be well paid. I'm in it for the money." What if...we reversed those two lines? I think it would make a lot more sense and go much better with the conversation. Check it out:
HAN: I'm not in this for your revolution and I'm not it for you, princess. I'm in it for the money and I expect to be well paid.
LEIA: If money is all that you love, then that's what you'll receive.
I think it works pretty well...any thoughts?
Well, again, it's completely unnecessary. Changes that improve the continuity are all right, but this is, no offence intended, crazy.