Originally posted by: Ollie

Originally posted by: Sky_
Thanks tweaker Ollie for your Feedback

I always Look forward to the Negative Feedback Simply for the reason
as I know where I went wrong with it

I've watched this thing though several times now (including on my laptop, which is much faster than my PC), and I must say I'm really starting to appreciate it more than I've said.

I find the opening to be very enjoyable, and to have Brando narrating, amongst other dialog and sound effects is a real treat. Just a thought, perhaps the credits could be toned down a little (in terms of movement). At times they are a little over-animated. For example the Newman’s credit which appears letter after letter, as opposed to whooshing across the screen. Sometimes simplicity is the way to go.

Yeah Your Right about the Newman Credits
There a bit over the top
That was Actually a mistake when I was Animating it
when I saw it rendered at the time as it took so long
I could'nt be bothered to fix that
But Now its done
also changed a few other things
Thanks once again keep me updated on what sticks out and doesn't fit in
as it help me a lot
Like I said because I worked on it
I don't notice all the stupid bits

hopefully Next week ill able to show you an Update on General Zod scene in white House
and if I can Another Scene where the Fire has Been redone