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Post #1676768

Author
Grand Admiral Thrawn
Parent topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Heirs to the Throne (WIP)
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Date created
4-Feb-2026, 2:45 PM

All good, just was thinking of how to address. My only thing is that sometimes the lines just don’t sound natural. It’s like that fine art of scriptwriting… you want to convey the point but don’t make it overly wordy.

How about something like:

  • “I was wrong. Legends exist to conquer a fear. What are you most afraid of?”