It really would be fantastic if credits similar to those used in STM could be re-created. I think it's the main thing holding your "Crystal Edition" intro back. Your credits just stand out a bit too much. Perhaps the font could just be outlined rather than coloured in.
Couple of other things:-
- Marc McClure's credit has been misspelled.
- The use of "Close Encounters" footage is a bit wrong in my opinion. It's worked well in a few "Superman Returns" trailers, but it doesn't blend in with the STM footage in this case.