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Post #1665681

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Vultural
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A few reviews . . (film or TV)
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Date created
22-Oct-2025, 3:43 PM

Companion - 2025 - 6/10

Strolling the grocers, heading toward the clichéd Produce section, Iris is about to meet-cute.
With Josh, who has the charisma of a never washed gym sock.
All ain’t fair in love, however, as Iris is being set up by greedy would-be criminals.
Despite being the ultimate innocent, Iris learns right quick.
This has the workings of a good, fun thriller, but the writing is clumsy.
Way too many sections of explanations and expositions.
Scriptwriting 101 – Show, don’t tell.