I enjoyed that - though you may get more traction posting this, and your other similar re-writes in the Script Writing and Re-writing forum?
Or asking the moderators to move your re-write stories and threads into there?
I imagine most people wouldn’t come to this section of the site looking for re-writing projects.
Plus, that’s what the Script Writing and Re-writing forum is there for - it doesn’t make much sense to have such projects posted outside of that specific forum?
I do hope you do more of these. 👍
Yeah youre right I shouldn’t have posted it so many times I just keep updating it so each time I post the more updated version