I enjoyed that - though you may get more traction posting this, and your other similar re-writes in the Script Writing and Re-writing forum?

Or asking the moderators to move your re-write stories and threads into there?

I imagine most people wouldn’t come to this section of the site looking for re-writing projects.

Plus, that’s what the Script Writing and Re-writing forum is there for - it doesn’t make much sense to have such projects posted outside of that specific forum?

I do hope you do more of these. 👍