https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zvAeQgRnjjE
Revisit Five Nights at Freddy’s with less humor and spoon feeding to preserve the tension. Adjustments are made to the characters for a stronger story.
With the upcoming release of Five Night’s at Freddy’s 2, I wanted to take a shot at the first film. I think the movie worked just fine but it had too many funny moments that downplayed the tension. While I didn’t mind the cameos by Mat Pat and Cory, they didn’t seem to be relevant for the plot. Lines of dialogue I felt hinted things too early or were just included to spoon feed the audience were taken out. A fair amount of editing was done to help strengthen the story while still keeping the humor that did work.
Cuts and Additions:
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Added more saturation, increased the gamma, and removed the yellow tint for a more vibrant, natural look.
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Removed the flashback of Mike’s security incident.
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Slightly trimmed William Afton’s run down on Freddy’s during Mike’s first night.
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Removed Mat Pat’s cameo.
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Cut Jeff suggesting that Mike should be killed.
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Removed Jane telling Jeff to not mess up the break in plan.
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Removed Ballon Boy’s second jump scare.
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Cut Foxy’s shadow appearing in the surveillance footage.
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Removed the bloody eyes jump scare from Foxy’s ghost kid.
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Shortened the amount of time the camera lingers on Vanessa after she tells Mike he’ll be fine if he does his job.
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Trimmed Hank fleeing for his life and removed his screams when Jeff watches through the monitors.
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Cut Mike saying “It’s them” when he looks at Abby’s drawing of the ghost kids.
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The entire fort building montage is removed.
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Cut Mike and Vanessa in the parking lot after Abby’s incident with the animatronics.
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Removed Mike at the pharmacy.
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Cut Mike saying yes to the blond ghost kid when he initially accepts to stay with his brother.
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Removed Foxy approaching Mike.
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Removed CoryxKenshin’s cameos.
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Replaced Mike telling Vanessa he said yes to the kids with an AI line saying they wouldn’t take no for an answer.
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Removed Abby wondering where Golden Freddy went.
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Changed the static shot of the Yellow Rabbit drawing with a slight zoom in.
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Removed Vanessa explaining that the animatronics don’t want to hurt anyone and are under the control of William.
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Removed a lingering shot of Vanessa when Mike looks up at her.
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Cut Mike demanding Vanessa to help him.
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Cut Abby telling Mike they should get out after she is saved from Chica.
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Removed William laughing when he confronts Mike in an effort to make him seem less cartoonish.
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Removed Abby showing concern for Foxy after Vanessa saves her.
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Cut William’s back and forth between Vanessa so he reveals his face right after she intervenes.
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Replaced Mike remembering Vanessa’s words about the animatronics being controlled with Dr. Lillian explaining how images can a tool for understanding the world.
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Removed Abby grunting when she approaches the drawings.
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Cut William asking what Abby did.
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Removed Abby saying “They can see you now” and “They know what you did”.
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William unintentionally sets off the springlocks when he lashes out at the animatronics. Shots that show the locks visible from the outside have been replaced or zoomed in.
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Slightly trimmed Mike’s conversation with Abby about the animatronics.