Trooperman: I read your notes and, your notes are a lot more organized then mine. Mine consists of a lot of "Cut to", "scene plays out", and "(insert something about a line here)". I have a comment about the geonosis droid scene. I like the way that you wrote it out take or, leave this suggestion. Mabye C3PO could say "Where are you going now? That means I am in charge here. Have you no sense at all?" Or, cut it to "Where are you going now? I am in charge here. Have you no sense at all?" like C3PO is trying to take control of R2 but, fails. Though, the way you wrote it, it works. So, take it or leave it. Also, I think somewhere in LOTR Christopher Lee says something like "Kill the others." I'll look at my DVD for the chapter. Also, happy holidays.

Okay, I looked and, it's on LOTR fellowship Chapter 13 at approximatly 1 hour 1 minute on disc two. It's after the man flesh speech.