I generally like how you incorporated the SC38 fanfilm into the scene, and I like that you cut the hallway part of the fight as it would be a bit too much. In my ideal ANH edit, I would include this and Adywan’s upgrades for a definitive version of the movie.

My only problem with how the scene is arranged is mainly the music choice; I didn’t like it in the original fanfilm, either. Rather than using scores from the Prequels, I feel it should mimic the style of ANH more, with a Force theme playing over Obi-WAN’s death just like in the original to sync better in when Williams’s score goes off during the escape. Ideally though, all the audio would be fixed to digital quality