Broom Kid,
I apologize if my post came across as aggressive. Unfortunately, the internet does not allow us to show emotion or intent.
I am glad about what you are attempting to do. I will be looking at your upload in a bit here. However, I think it could be useful for some of your changes where cuts and trims are made to show a before and after so we can get a sense if the cuts feel natural and flow smoothly.
My impression here is that you are making your own edit with Hal’s as a base, correct?