Another small tweak to consider…
- Remove Baze calling Jyn “little sister”
He’s known her like a day at most, that moment has always come across as odd and trying to forcefully add more of a family-type vibe to the group that just isn’t there.
Idk, I thought that thematically dovetailed nicely with the story in Andor about Cassian’s sister. This video explains the connection better than I could: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LUvkfaC3hng