Another small tweak to consider…
- Remove Baze calling Jyn “little sister”
He’s known her like a day at most, that moment has always come across as odd and trying to forcefully add more of a family-type vibe to the group that just isn’t there.
Another small tweak to consider…
He’s known her like a day at most, that moment has always come across as odd and trying to forcefully add more of a family-type vibe to the group that just isn’t there.