I agree that version B just feels more natural.
On another note, do we really need Finn’s constant interruptions? It breaks the flow and tension.
Best of luck any way this turns out.
Post #1642978
- Author
- honestabe
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- The Rise of Skywalker: Untold (WIP)
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- Date created
- 18-Apr-2025, 11:45 PM