Even with just the temp audio, wow, I think that works and flows perfectly - well done! It’ll take some getting used to (with the original so well-ingrained in memory) but this is certainly a good change to get used to 😉
I assume you’ll keep the siren blaring up until it gets cut off moments before the Imperials ‘fire-zipper’ the door, just like how you had it in the original Revisited? Always loved how you handled that detail and the impact it has on the scene.
And we’re glad to see you’re doing okay, Ady, even if your monitor currently is not. Hoping you can get that situation resolved soon but in the meantime we’re still here for you 😃