Originally posted by: InfoDroid
And is there no "stow aboard seperate ships" scene with the Jedi to establish where they're going and what their plan is? Or do we not need it?
Ah yes, I like that beat-- but it will come later, after the Queen scene. I think that makes it clearer what the Jedi are getting into.
Totally. I have to send a couple edit changes to Erik, I guess. I'd like to post the change to the ship landing and to Q's dialogue that I mentioned before. I am not making any changes that don't appear on this board-- except all the double secret probation changes!
LOL! In that case, I'll have to consider it.
And is there no "stow aboard seperate ships" scene with the Jedi to establish where they're going and what their plan is? Or do we not need it?
Ah yes, I like that beat-- but it will come later, after the Queen scene. I think that makes it clearer what the Jedi are getting into.
and please make sure you're keeping track of changes you make to the script after it's been posted on the site, so that we all know what's going on.
Totally. I have to send a couple edit changes to Erik, I guess. I'd like to post the change to the ship landing and to Q's dialogue that I mentioned before. I am not making any changes that don't appear on this board-- except all the double secret probation changes!
LOL! In that case, I'll have to consider it.
eggcellent. Whatever it takes, you need this to generate more shots. The first Qui Gonn scene desperately needs those close ups to anchor us to those characters. The one shot master gives them all the impact of featured co-stars. Qui Gonn is THE MAN in this edit. He needs to feel like it visually.
InfoDroid -- My PM is on now -- didn't know it was off
Hope Trooperman hasn't tried to send his notes to me yet
