As for the dialogue-- we can't just leave it up to any one person. It's too delicate an issue and shapes the story. We need to all agree what the Nemoidians say. Feel free to take a hack at it, but please don't go "final" without letting us comment. It shapes who Nute is, who the TF is, and how Sidious and Maul fit into the story.
It should probably be one of the last things we finalize if that's possible. We will probably find lots of opportunities to "cover" problems with Nemoidian dialogue that aren't apparent yet.
Again-- thanks for doing the hard work and for taking my input. This is a blast!
Edited: Didn't see CC's post until after I posted. Glad to meet your approval with this approach-- I like the suspenseful build up so much, I was afraid someone would have a good reason not to do it. :-(
But you like. Alri-i-ght.