I overall agree with this. My only changes would be:
TFA: Cut down some of the ratthar (sp?) attack.
TLJ: Cut Leia slapping Poe. If their genders were changed in ANY way, the slap would never happen.
Also, split some of the Canto Bight scenes in between the other set pieces instead of it happening in one long block. That gives it time to breathe, and integrates it with the rest of the action, as opposed to seeming like an outlier.