inserting deleted scenes back in helps. Excellent work on those by the way, I believe you achieved a new level of detail on them!
Thanks for your kind words!
If I may give a few suggestions for the updated version that I believe you are working on: In the new VFX shot of Obi tracking Jango, you might consider giving Geonosis- planet a zoom out/zoom in- effect instead of it moving up on the screen or adding easing to the motion. When Anakin has a breakdown at homestead and says “Why couldn’t I save her. I know I could have!”, I suggest that you cut the shot just a little bit earlier. Now you can see Anakin starting to move to the left, but it the next shot he sits down, witch is a bit jarring cut.
I like all of those suggestions!
With the new VFX shot, I made the planet move up so as to tie in with the previous shot in the film, which shows the starfighter slightly drifting downwards. I’m happy to revisit the shot – I do like the idea of adding a zoom-in effect!
With the scene of Anakin in the homestead, your suggestion makes perfect sense – I will revisit that scene and alter the timing of the cut.
Also the voice of Jarjar is little muffled / echo-y in the Padme’s apartment scene. Some AI voice cleaner tool might be helpful with that, at least Adobe has a free one called “Enhanced speech”.
With the redubbed dialogue, I unfortunately don’t have an external microphone, so I recorded the audio solely with the in-built microphone on my laptop, which isn’t a great microphone at all haha! It resulted in a lot of reverb in the audio, which wasn’t intentional. I’ll revisit the audio, and see if I can get it sounding better.
All in all, nice job!
Thanks very much!! I do appreciate your feedback and suggestions. 😃