Considering how many scenes you cut or shortened I’m surprised you managed to make this 1 h 52 mins long. Of course the movie in it’s “raw” form is the longest of the 6 part saga and inserting deleted scenes back in helps. Excellent work on those by the way, I believe you achieved a new level of detail on them! Personally I would axe much more of the beginning assassination and following chase and keep the asteroid chase but personal preferences and all that…The end ground battle flows well without the Dooku’s war room and some superfluous talking bits.

If I may give a few suggestions for the updated version that I believe you are working on: In the new VFX shot of Obi tracking Jango, you might consider giving Geonosis- planet a zoom out/zoom in- effect instead of it moving up on the screen or adding easing to the motion. When Anakin has a breakdown at homestead and says “Why couldn’t I save her. I know I could have!”, I suggest that you cut the shot just a little bit earlier. Now you can see Anakin starting to move to the left, but it the next shot he sits down, which is a bit jarring cut. Also the voice of Jarjar is little muffled / echo-y in the Padme’s apartment scene. Some AI voice cleaner tool might be helpful with that, at least Adobe has a free one called “Enhanced speech”.

All in all, nice job!