Hey JoyOfEditing (JOE),
I really like what you’ve done with the final battle! Especially chopping out all of the Gungan fighting. The overall pacing is soooo much better. There are still a few things that kinda bug me though. I made some edits of a few scenes and am curious what you think?
Cut the scene of Ben in the shaft and force pulling himself up and over Maul.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1X8YLVtiU-Ux7exGujB32QvOWuLMtwbQh/view?usp=drive_link
Shorter aggressive version
https://drive.google.com/file/d/11LZazrWbr9dJZA1L0Ouwk0E3UHl_Hee3/view?usp=drive_link
Cut Ben falling from the platform
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ryNiZdqR53FerqsHCtSu8SjTlMEOaURD/view?usp=drive_link
Ben Falls but Maul and QuiGon don’t
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1lhjg8FDx8_mTOM6lReq_4lHJ-X7e906Z/view?usp=drive_link
Random clips slightly shortened
•Trim Gungan stalling to hit the shield activation
•Trim Anakin and QuiGon dialogue
•Trim ship being shot and taking its time to fall to the ground
•Trim Captain Panaka shooting the window excessively
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ylfb40LGhBkUb5e3m04AOyCP24N62hen/view?usp=drive_link