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Post #1630740

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JF_Sanderson
Parent topic
The Black Hole (1hr 20min Cut)
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Date created
28-Feb-2025, 1:54 AM

Ok I just watched this and it had less fluff than I remember. Mostly just really tense drama. I liked it.

I watched with subtitles and I must report there was a decent amount of errors & omissions. “Move this glass” should be “smooth as glass,” “are there worlds” should be “other worlds,” etc. once or twice where words hang on the screen for a minute and we lose captions for other lines. Signium should probably be Cygnium.

This edit would be a good basis for somebody to do further revisions, such as:

  • eliminating much of the meteor storm and making the damage to the Cygnus entirely caused by the destruction of the Palomino

  • replacing the terrible “heroic” music during the hospital rescue since the rest of the score is wonderful

  • toning down any gunplay to the minimum required for continuity

  • add blood to Tony Perkins death if it won’t look fake

I do not understand the conflict between Maximilian and Dr Reinhart, or why they combined at the end, but it certainly is weird.