While I love this Anakin's Dream clip as a fan -- I don't believe it suits the film we're making. I mean to comment on the way this dream comes off, and not the impact it has. Actually, seeing this clip makes me think a dream will help the movie-- but not such an explicit montage of clips.
Trooperman's dream sequence is posted as screen-caps in the SOTD thread. He's doing his best to emulate the dreams from ROTS which work for what they're supposed to do.
Putting this much information in a dream for Anakin will create an imbalance. Why doesn't he mention a dream that's this clear?
I don't think we can have any image that's recognizable as a clip from the movie. I love the way you tweaked the images, by the way.
Let's talk about what this dream is supposed to accomplish, because to me it has to be something confusing and indeciferable as it happens and only become clear in hindsight. I think it might be as simple as blackness with Qui Gonn yelling "Anakin!!" then blending to Padme's voice of saying "Anakin" and waking him up. The real point I think we need to hammer home is the special connection Qui Gonn and Anakin have and the fact that Anakin is special and far more powerful than he realizes.
A premonition of Qui Gonn's death just can't be covered properly in the rest of the film. Remember, such dreams drive all Anakin's actions in SOTD and in ROTS. We can't just put another one in here and never refer to it again. Further, I don't see what tipping our hand about Qui Gonn's death gets us.
But getting into Anakin's head this way has a strong sense of value to it, so I want to support the idea of a dream -- just (and I apologize) not the way we're trying it right now.