This is a solid work print here.
I think for the musical score it should be changed up a little bit. I think some aspects of this variant Vader theme would work after Boba informs Vader:
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=fNtkuqzN3zs
I also like the opening voiceover and flying through hyperspace in this animated version of the Vader-Boba interaction. It really draws in your attention right away and gives the audience a quick introduction to Boba and his mission. It could work.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Lfk6XPuxExs
- Based on my understanding, regularjoe was recommending that the scene takes place before the opening crawl. This would imply that there was a passage of time before the events of ESB take place. I agree in principle that there should be an appearance of some time passing to give the appearance that Vader was hunting Luke for an unspecified period of time. On the other hand, the original Star Wars movies never use prologues.
==> One way or another, thank you for the work and looking forward to the finished product. I am glad someone is attempting to get this nice moment into a live action scene.