That sounds good.
I’d need to watch the scene back, but when the kids are down below arguing, is there a place you might be able to end the scene both before they split up and also before the camera shows the ship up above? Ideally we need to create the impression that the resort dumps their ship down below to be scrapped.
Both derekwkim’s & Zuberas’ edits have handled this well in different ways. Maybe check them out
I don’t watch other edits whilst I’m doing my own because I like to create my own vision. Looking at Zuberas’ change list he kept virtually all of episode 6, so presumably the kids separating has been retained. Looks like he compensated by heavily editing the first 2 episodes and cutting virtually all of the parents’ scenes.
I’ve uploaded my At-Accrin sequence if anyone is interested in viewing and providing feedback. 11 mins in total including the lead in, exit and spacer scenes.