Originally posted by: THX
Maul's arrival on Tatooine is unnecessary. He could appear first when he duels Qui-Gon on Tatooine.

Actually you need a scene or somehow convey what his purpose is, I dont remember any movies that work like heres the action now later well tell you why that happened, you have to explain on whats going on, or you'll just end up what we have now, confusion; but I think if you can somehow include that Grevious theme into his entrance or maybe some alternative it works wonderfully.

Just as GL envisoned star wars to be a music opera where the music tells the story alas his latest movies have gone away with this idea, but thats for another topic entirely.