I’m having a hard time with the “I brought him home” line. It just doesn’t sound much like Jake. But the other part sounds great, plenty of options:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1eIzeSZ9sRZJCL-TyxIYedc6_SgmuvT5I?usp=drive_link
EDIT: I just had to add the word “with me” at the end and it suddenly sounds better. Very short sentences are hard for the AI to do I guess.