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Post #1622698

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Grand Admiral Thrawn
Parent topic
Star Wars Episode I: Cloak Of Deception (Released)
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Date created
3-Jan-2025, 4:06 PM

Hal 9000 said:

May be too wordy, but something like, “He’s in much better shape than when I found him.”

Maybe like this for the full line since it is mostly all off-screen:
Come on, I’ll show you Threepio. I fixed him up. He’s way better now. Watch.
turns Threepio on

EDIT: I see what you mean. Watched the full unaltered scene. This could work:

  • Ani: “Come on, I’ll show you Threepio. I brought him home.” removes cloak covering him “I’m fixing him up. He’s way better now.
  • Padme: “He’s wonderful.
  • Ani: “You really like him? He’s a protocol droid to help mom. Watch.” turns Threepio on