Just made a late change and trimmed the beginning of the breakup scene. The Paradox script did in fact go for a shortened version of the scene where Clara breaks up with Doc (It originally began with Clara saying “Goodbye? But Emmett, I don’t understand…”), but I felt like I shouldn’t do it for fear that the pacing might be affected. And besides, I felt like the change wasn’t that big of a deal in comparison to a lot of the other cuts I’ve made. However, looking back at the edit as a whole, I feel that the shortened version of the breakup is far more impactful than keeping it in full, so I decided to, well, follow the script again. My apologies for those who prefer pacing, but hey, I said I would try to get this edit as close to the Paradox script as best as I could, so I might well keep my promise.