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Post #1621136

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Jar Jar Bricks
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Star Wars: The Lost Planet (A Skeleton Crew Edit) [RELEASED 1080p, 5.1]
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24-Dec-2024, 11:22 PM

Wow, what an absolutely fantastic episode compared to the last one! The best part is that I’m pretty sure at this point that he did indeed keep all their money from last episode, which aligns with the changes made there. I’m not sure how much of this episode you can feasibly trim up, but I do have some general suggestions, if you’re willing to hear me out again:

  • The parent intro can probably be split into two separate scenes quite easily so you can space these out - the first scene being when Wim’s dad is accessing the terminal and gets caught, and the second scene being when he talks to Fern’s mother.
  • The scene of the bounty hunter lady actually contacting the pirates can probably be cut.
  • You might be able to cut the party splitting into separate teams and just have them all head to the same place.

Honestly, you’ve got a tough job figuring out what else to cut out. I enjoyed most of what was here this week, so maybe just slight cuts here and there will be enough. My personal theory is that Yod left the Jedi at a young age to turn to villainy and was Qui-Gon Jinn’s first apprentice.