I’ve completed my edit of the first three episodes in SD 5.1 audio. It’s clocking in at 1h 16 including crawl and logos. If anyone wants to check it out DM me. Here is a detailed list of changes.
Logos
Opening crawl with New Republic logo. [2 mins]
Episode 1: [41mins cut to 29mins]
Cut opening pirate scene.
Cut Wim going back into his room for his coat.
Cut Neel getting something in his eye as he roleplays with Wim.
Trim schoolbus journey.
Cut Runa talking about being an accountant.
Cut Neel talking to Wim about Runa.
Trim pause before Neel says “like what”
Cut Fern’s speeder breaking down.
Cut Wim and Neel walking home.
Cut KB trying to repair the bike.
Cut the scene where Fern and her mum interact.
The sequence in the edit is Neel saying “like what” with a hard cut to Fern and KB on their speeder to the point where Fern says “wasn’t that great?” and a hard cut to Wim studying in his bedroom.
Cut Wim looking at the shapes dangling from his ceiling whilst he is in bed.
Trim sequence of WIm taking the short cut on his bike.
Edit Wim’s bike journey and discovery of the hatch into one sequence. He finds the hatch before we cut to Neel in the exam hall.
Cut Neel’s interaction with the droid in the exam hall.
Cut Wim “how much longer” and the safety droid “the proctor will see you shortly”.
Slight trimming of the Wim-Fern scene outside the proctors office to remove overly long pauses.
Cut Wim asking Neel’s siblings where he is and the Neel bath scene. We transition from Wim walking away from Fern to Wim and Neel opening the garage door.
Cut Neel “what should my callsign be” - it is edited as though the Jedi 1-Jedi 2 callsigns are well established between Neel and Wim.
Cut the “claimsies” interaction.
Trim the Wim-Neel digging scene to remove reference to “claimsies”.
Cut Ferm “I bet there is an old power converter in there” - the speeder breakdown has been cut, so this line is no longer relevant.
Cut Wim “what’s she duping” [talking about KB] and Fern “quiet”.
Cut Wim “this is so great”…… it’s exciting…. we’re exploring”
Cut Wim shouting “my own jedi Temple” and the jump scare when sees his reflection.
Cut Wim pressing the green button. We know he does it and it works better not seeing him do it.
Cut Wim slipping when the crew are pulling him up to the hatch.
Episode 2: [24mins cut to 19mins]
Cut KB “if that was hyperspace we could be really far away”
Cut Ferm “but its true” and “right” to SM-33
Shorten long pause between SM-33 saying “stowaways” and “captain”
Cut SM-33 searching through his databanks for At-Attin.
Cut Neel “Wim… we’re in hyperspace”.
Trim ship\s approach to the pirate port.
Cut the crew paying the ferry pilot and Wim hiding his credits.
Cut KB and Fern exploring the port and their interaction with the hooker.
Cut one shot of the Wim and Neel running defence.
Trim SM-33’s approach to defend the crew.
Cut Ferm “I’m not leaving without KB…… and the boys”.
Cut the SM-33 - Fern back-and-forth about whether they are pirates.
Cut KB talking about the legend of At-Attin’s treasure.
Trim Yod’s approach.
Episode 3: [31mins cut to 25mins]
Opening scene with the parents is moved to when the Crew are un hyperspace on their way to the moon.
Cut Yod “it’s easier to hide in a crowd than an empty corridor” and the crew walking through the port.
It’s edited so that Fern chooses to go the quiet way and we cut to the crew on the ferry ship - implying that they went the quiet way.
Cut Fern “I though the jedi never left a man behind” and Yod “Thats not a thing… the jedi say”.
Cut Yod switching on the CZ droid.
Cut Yod encountering his old shipmate.
Cut Fern “like really good string”
Massively trim the crew’s walk across the moon including the chat about back stabbing.
Cut final scene where the X-wing pilots interact with the owl.