For now I’m inclined to think that the best thing to do is to remove that prologue from the final cut. I think it too obviously foreshadows the identity of Jude Law’s character, which we don’t mind, but I think the dramatic setting would work much better by hiding it a bit more.
Otherwise, I see the cut as very neat so far. The only thing that worries me about this edit is that so far it seems to me to be a very stringy series, it doesn’t waste time with almost anything. Maybe it will be harder than other shows to take footage out of it, but I trust smudger9.