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Post #1617604

Author
TheDimitrios
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Star Wars Animated Film Collection
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Date created
27-Nov-2024, 12:28 PM

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Very nice finale. Overall this edit is very good, has good pacing and works nicely. That is an achievement considering the source material.

A few suggestions that came to mind while watching:
Omega is told to stay on Pabu by all characters and then just comes with them anyway to the Snow planet.l without a reason given for it.

The cyanide equivalent hidden in the teeth is not etablished and never comes back. The reference to it in the interrogation scene can be cut without losing anything.

After Rex sees the target hologram of Omega, it cuts to the Batch waiting for Echo. (who was with them the last time we saw them) This feels a bit disorienting. Showing Echo leave or working with another timejump somehow might resolve the issue.

Adding the Batch attaching to the science vessel (very trimmed version) might flow better. Between Echo being onboard in Disguise and the Batches Ship being attached to that vessel it is really felt that something is missing here.

I really think these are super close to perfection. Now on to Rebels. 😃