I really enjoyed this edit. I think this is where the need to transform television Star Wars into movies is most noticeable. In general terms, I thought the series was correct, but the problems were very evident and, as you have rightly indicated, the fact that it was a television series affected it greatly.
It’s clear that the messy structure didn’t suit him at all, mostly because the secrets he was hiding weren’t worth enough anticipation to reveal them near the end of the series. The way you build it doesn’t make it more surprising, but it does feel much more honest.
As always, congratulations for what you do. I have a folder with all your projects saved on two hard drives, I don’t think I have a better way to tell you how much I appreciate your work.