I think this is nearly perfect. The reveal works so well and it’s executed fantastically. I only had 2 minor issues, first off it’s very unclear what Rey says right before she picks up the dagger. Not sure if the line is AI or not, but it needs more work to be intelligible. I only have one other really minor nitpick, I don’t like the shot of Palatine’s chair spinning to face the audience from Return of the Jedi. It feels like it slows down the vision a little bit, but it isn’t a huge issue. Also, the Sith eye effect is perfect it feels like it was meant to be there the entire time.