A little on the nose and out place in Star Wars but nice reference to hardware wars. The clothes Iron.

I don’t have a hard time with the dialog all that much in this I did think the Huggs thing was dumb.

And the comedy tone does not fit Star Wars like Finn leaking in a Bacta Suit?

The slow WW2 Bombers in space thing was really out of place in Star Wars though when you have bombers like those small fighters the size of X-wings Y- Wing bomber?

Luke is reluctant to train Rey because she could become the next failure like Kylo, and he is still upset with his pride destroying everything he built. Its not because he knows she is Palpatine, they made that up on the next film great way to write a series.