There’s nothing that bothers me except the Rose “fighting what we hate, saving what we love” bit. The line itself is clunky, but also the moment itself just doesn’t land. Finn’s attempted sacrifice doesn’t come across as doomed enough, Rose’s move to save him looks certain to kill them both, and a giant cannon shooting the Resistance base is a really weird choice of backdrop to a corny moral and a kiss.
Fine with the dialogue for the most part though.