… I still want to work on the sequence where Torbin and Sol leave the camp, as I’m trying to make it clear that they’re just going together, as opposed to Sol chasing Torbin.
I don’t know about this, I think Sol “chasing” after Torbing to stop him, and then just deciding to help him is really good at highlighting how irresponsible and higher-than-thou Sol is
It is! But “I just want to go home” is a really flimsy motivation, and I would need to spend at least 10 minutes of running time establishing that.