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Post #1608061

Author
g00b
Parent topic
Star Wars Rebels Recut - A Fanedit TV Series
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Date created
12-Sep-2024, 2:54 AM

Looking to get some feedback on the title crawl I’ve put together for the rebels season 4 movie. Please give me feedback on anything from the content of the crawl to how it looks!

https://youtu.be/W1VgpbSXn48

Crawl text:
The Galactic Empire reigns.
The Rebellion desperately
struggle for their survival,
scattered across the
galaxy.

ADMIRAL THRAWN has
begun construction on a
new TIE fighter. One that
is more powerful than the
original design. He has
hidden the factory for
constructing them on
Lothal, a planet in the
fringes of the Outer Rim.

As the citizens of Lothal
continue to suffer, two Jedi
Knights return to their small
band of rebels based on
Yavin IV…