I liked the edit overall. The middle portion of the edit was the best by far. The opening and closing acts were a bit mediocre, but that is mostly a result of the show being filled with content that was not the greatest.
I still think the closing act could have used a bit more trimming here and there. I really think it would be a good idea if someone subbed out Thrawn’s lines in the show with ones made in Rebels considering we are using the exact same actor (or another one of his roles). Thrawn’s decision making in the show was not the greatest to put it mildly (he could have easily wiped out the 3 heroes with an aerial bombardment for example). Alternative dialogue could help alleviate some of those issues.
I would recommend it, but it is still far from perfect and that is because the source material was not the best.