Your Falcon and the Winter Soldier edit was a fantastic example of a show with poor pacing being converted into an excellent movie seamlessly. I’m definitely looking forward to your style of editing applied here.

I know your edit isn’t a “fix”, but one suggestion I have is from Mathismando’s edit where we never see Torbin’s death, akin to Kelnacca later on. Mae wouldn’t be seen on the planet until Sol confronts her. Should save a lot of runtime. Although I would also remove the two lines that mention Torbin killed himself and perhaps that he hasn’t talked to anybody for 10 years. That way you don’t have to include as much him in the flashbacks, which it looks like you’ll be cutting down quite a bit. Plus, even with all of that content, he still doesn’t have much justification for being so depressed.

What are your plans concerning the ending? No to Yoda, yes to Plagueis, etc.?