Sad that Disney canceled it, I really liked seeing a different time period and some new characters. I would definitely keep Plagueis and cut Yoda. Maybe you can cut Osha saying she will try to find her sister at the end. I would also fix that doubled knife audio in the beginning fight.
Would you consider adding a classic star wars crawl? The pan down to the surface may be hard since the text is over top of the pan, but maybe a new planet shot could be created to pan down from. Can’t wait for the new version!
Yep, it is sad. But As I wrote elsewhere, the story is good, but the execution is lacking, Disney and Lucasfilm just can’t greenlight a S2 to the same creative team. I wouldn’t be surprise though that Q’mir and Plagueis come back later… They are canon after all! I like what I did with Osha at the end, to “suggest” with short flashback shots why Mae lost her memory… I’ll cut Yoda… I’ll also try to do something with that last shot…
And yes… when you told about the doubled knife audio, it was the first modification I did for the V1.5! lol… I was just waiting for other ajustments, to make the work of a new output worth its while!! lol