The redubbed lines work really well to humanize the troopers.
I thought it was a much better choice then just letting them be nonsensically stupid hahah
The last “We better get moving” should have the voice changed. To me, it sounds like a drunk guy getting strangled. I am sure you can play around with audio editing tools to get that quickly done.
I’ll keep this in mind. So far I’ve heard more good feedback about this line then bad but I understand your perspective. It’s the sole reason I want more feedback on the small exchange! I’ll wait to hear from more people in regard to keeping it or fixing it. I’m currently on the side of keeping it (though it’s probably because I did the voice acting so I’m more attached to it) but we’ll see! 😄
Thanks again for your valuable feedback honestabe! 😄